Sunday, July 27, 2008

What kind of presenter am I? (C 15)

Having presented in an impromptu speech, how did you evaluate yourself as a presenter? How have your friends and group members evaluated you? How do you feel about the evaluation? Are they justified? Post your comments.

25 comments:

Anonymous said...

Athirah,
Last monday we have impromtu in our section.It was very happening.Everyone try their own best to do the speech.In that game i got topic coupling in university.Actually i have some idea to be elaborate,but like i say before it is quiet difficult to speak in english. I am trying to do the best but suddenly i stop for 3 minutes ,i think.Everyone keep ask me to speak.After that,i start again until end.My freinds said that i have idea but i am not confident to speak.They also say that my speech is clear but i dont have eye contact on them.Actually i feel shy.From the comments i got from my freinds,i think i can speak but i have to be more confident and brave.I really want to be a good presenter one day.So i will never give up.Thanks to all my freinds in section 15.I really appreciate your comments on me.i also appreciate all rthe comments from all of you.I think all the comment will make us improve our presentation skills.

Anonymous said...

During the class,i have learn many things.One of it is that i can found out about myself as a presenter.I found out that i have several weakness that may turn me as a bad presenter.First of all,i found out that my voice is not clear and loud enough during presentation in front of my friend.Secondly,i have less eyes contact with the people.So,to ensure that my speech would not be so boring,i should overcome my weakness first.

Anonymous said...

azizul(sorry forgot to mention my name in my first comment)
During the class,i have learn many things.One of it is that i can found out about myself as a presenter.I found out that i have several weakness that may turn me as a bad presenter.First of all,i found out that my voice is not clear and loud enough during presentation in front of my friend.Secondly,i have less eyes contact with the people.So,to ensure that my speech would not be so boring,i should overcome my weakness first.

Anonymous said...

malyanah,
As we all know on the 28th July,our class has held an activity named impromtu.The objectives were to make ourself to get used to deliver a speech and to know what kind of presenter we are.This can be achieve by the comments given from the other members of the group.Well,in this activity my speech was on the living in UMP which I have quite a lots of ideas.However,I did not manage to deliver it properly.I was very nervous and hole of my body is chilling out.Therefore,I have given a wrong greeting.It was suppose to be good morning but accidently what was coming out was good evening.Although,it was quite embarrassing I brave myself and continue my speech.Then,everything went smoothly.However,I make another mistake in the middle of the speech and I did not manage to cover it and I keep quite for about 1 minute.After,I comfort myself and say that I can do it,I finally manage to finish my speech.At that time,i feel very relife.Next,all of the group members start to pass up their comments to me.From their comment I know that I need to improve more.
My eye cotact was very poor as I keep looking at my paper and have not manage to cover the mistake I have done.On the other hand,the strength that they say in me was that I have lots of idea and my voice was loud and clear.I really appreciate their comments.It surely will help me to improve my speaking skill.Lastly,I really hope that one day i can be a good presenter.I will make other good presenter as a role model and try to be like them.

vdex said...

lee wei de (vista)
Actually,myself already know what kind of presenter i am.Exactly like what my friends evaluated me,i always use the "ahh" word to cover my lag of speech,it causes my presentation not smooth enough.The biggest problem is i am actually lacking of terms to use.Really regret didn`t read dictionary while i was a child.That time i thought it was weird to read a dictionary.I felt very upset when i know i`m a monotoner too.Maybe i should go to karaoke it could train my monotone into polytone,who knows.One more problem,i don`t have eye-contact??Maybe i miss out some of my audience,i will try to cover up next time.Finally,my weakness is too relax??Wow,if relax is a weakness too...maybe next time i will try to get more serious,i think.Before i forgoten,another comment from my friend is i don`t have body language.Wow,seems i am a very weak presenter for now because i got all the weakness from that microsoft dude maybe even more than that.Hopefully,after this i manage to avoid all these deadly mistakes.From the deepest heart,i felt dissapointed with my performance after read comments from my friends,i will try my best to fix all these mistakes.

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum and hi to all. What kind of presenter am I? Well, giving out an impromptu speech is a nerve breaking thing. Not just for me, but for anyone who is asked to give out a speech on the spot. As we all know, on last Tuesday we have to give out a speech on whatever topic we get. I got to speak about "Unforgettable Moment". I've been asked many times before about my unforgettable moments, and I've been asking myself since, "What is my unforgettable moment?!" and I don't think I have one... But on last Tuesday, I've figured out my so-called "Unforgettable Moment". I was the last one in my group to give out my speech. I don't have enough time to speak and I have to shorten my speech as the other group had finished their turn in giving out speech. At the end of the day, lots of comments I've got said that my speech is too short. What can I do my dear friends...? You were very anxious to get out of class early!!! (Since Mdm Noli was not there to supervise us...). However, I am very much pleased that you all were very honest in evaluating me just to make myself even better in the future to give out an "unforgettable", longer speech in a more confident way. p.e.a.c.e!

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum..Hi everybody.When we talk about giving a public speaking my heart beats start to pump more high.I can't give the spontaneous speech without prepair the point to talk about.What kind of presenter am I?That one we can conclude later.But now I would like to share with you about the activity we have done recently.On 28th July,we had an impromtu which we have to deliver a speech within 2 minutes if i'm not mistaken.It was an enjoyable moment.Everybody give their speech without no one miss it.I was the last one to give the speech in my group.At that time,Ms Noli was not there anymore.But,thankfully all my friends give full cooperative and the activity going smoothly.The way we delivered our speech was not too formal and this make me feel comfortable with the situation.I don't feel so nervous,maybe it was because they are all my friend and it was just like talking to our friends.After all,I've got some comments from my friends.Some of them said that my point was too short and keep repeating.Yes,I do realise it.I think it was my weakness and i have to improve it!But then,I also got a comment which said that i have a good eye contact with the audience.My speech was also smooth.I've learnt so much things on what are important to be a good presenter.Hopefully my dream to be a good presenter becomes true.

Anonymous said...

what kind of presenter am i?...a question that cannot being answered by myself...all i do is try my best to deliver my ideas in simple word so that the audience will understand what i'm trying to say...lets talk about the activities we do recently called 'impromptu speech'...it kind of remembered me to Malaysian University English Test(MUET) where all of us sits for the test...what we have to do is prepare our topic for two minutes and talk about it in two minutes...same goes here...my topic is 'what is your unforgettable experience(s)'...after two minutes brainstorming i only manage to list down two main points...things get worse when i am the first one to give my speech...i did not deliver my first point very well but i think my second point safe my speech...in my speech, i realise that i do pausing quite a lot and it shows when i use a lot of 'aaa', 'eerm' and etc...i also realise that i did not use much eye contact to the other students...so, i think with all the explanation, you will know what kind of presenter am i...The End...

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum.. Last week, Our class have to do activity called 'impromptu speech'.Each of us have to give a speech about two minutes and prepare our topic also two minutes..So, what kind presenter am I? This question have been answered by comments from all my friends.. I have got a topic about 'Social Problems In University'.As we all know, when we have to speak on the spot..it is difficult to us to give a good point.From all the comments that I get,some of them said that I am not confident during give a speech and have a good idea but don't know how to elaborate the point..Some of them also said that I have a good eye contact and smile during give a speech..After doing this activity, I realize my weakness and my strength.. So, I will try to overcome my weakness and improve myself to be a good presenter.. Thanks to all my friends and I really appreciate all the comments from all of you..

xin_the_phantom_kid said...

XiN[solihin]
Assalamualaikum and good moning,evening to all uf us...
Last Tuesday,our class had do an interesting activity called 'impromptu speech'.Each of us have to give a speech about what title we got..The speech must be at least 2minutes(the teacher said)..So,in a limited time to prepared, we have to give a speech..So, what kind presenter am I? This question have been answered by comments from all my friends in their comment above.. i got a sad topic that is 'My first break up'..Thanks to anep because write the title..hehe..thanks also to all my group members that give the comments about what i have said.. Honestly, i think that i have a lot of mistakes in my speech.. I'm quite nervous,dont know how to use body language n my voice not sound so clear.. But there is also comment that say i got the main point to say(i think this is because that is my experience)... So,after doing this activities i will know my weakness nand strength in giving a speech..so,i hope in the future i will be a good presenter and be more confident in front of the audience like najib.. Thanks again to teacher and all of my frienda for all the comment.. I hope we together can be asm good as T.J.Walker

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum to all my dearest friend...Last week on 28th July 2008,our class had done an interesting activitie called "impromptu speech"..What we have to do on that day is to give our speech on the spot..The time that given to all of us is 2 minutes to prepared the point and 2 minutes to delivered it in the group..What kind of presenter i am?..talk about what kind of presenter i am,i think i am not a very good presenter..Honestly,i hate public speaking or some that make me to give a speech in front the big audience..But i think an activities like "improptu speech" can make me to built my confident to give a speech..in that day i know that i am quite nervous..i think i am lack of idea like the comment said..i think i will improve my self next time and i hope i can be like the expert presenter..i like to be like them very much and i hope i can achieve that..thanks a lot to my dearest friend who give me a positive comment on that day..i will keep it as a spirit for me to give a good spech next time..THE END..

Anonymous said...

Good day,
The title I got last Monday during the impromptu presentation was ' I don't like pink’. Since the title totally contradicts with my own personality, Madam Noli allowed me to change the topic to 'I like pink'. After my very short presentation, I think I spoke less than 2 minutes, I receive comments for my strength such as speaks well, have eye contact and body language, good ideas, confident, can speak fluently, have the point, speaks clearly, good voice projection, interesting, and good grammar. As for the comments on my weaknesses were that I have monotonous voice, less explanation and points, have a low voice, why my hair not pink, I must change my favourite colour, I change the topic , always look at the note, and have to bring out more example. I admit I was quite nervous that time and I always look down at the notes instead of looking at my fellow friends. I am sure most people do have butterfly in their stomach when presenting. About the low and monotonous voice, I will work on that. I just do not hope that one day I will be like the Microsoft guy or even the ‘identity 2.0’ guy. So, what type of presenter am 1? Well, based on all the comments, I think that I am an average presenter, not a very good presenter and also not a very bad presenter. Thanks for all the comments. I really appreciate it.

Anonymous said...

jaja,assalamualikum
last week,i got the title for my public speaking is 'the colour that represent myself'.i think the title is interesting but a i spoke less than 2 minutes.from the comment that i got from my friends,i not a good presenter.most of comment that i had receive said that i'm lack of point eventhough my body language,eye contact and voice is good.so from the comment i have to improve my public speaking.thank you

Anonymous said...

Syahir...
Assalamualaikum and very good morning or good afternoon or good evening or good night or good midnight to all my friend. Last Tuesday,our class had do an interesting activity called 'impromptu speech'(teacher said) but I don't think its interesting to me because I hate public speaking.So I forced myself to build up my confident to give a 'good speech'.So, what kind presenter am I? This question have been answered by comments from all my group members in their comment above.. i got a bad topic that is my favourite food(budu).This topic was given by Fifa.I don't know what to say about this title because I like all food include 'budu'.I try to talk loudly,so they can hear my voice clearly. After I read the comment, I know that I have confident in my speech but I don't have good point and my vocabulary is weak.So,after doing this activities i will know my weakness and strength in giving a speech. So,i hope in the future i will be a good presenter and be more confident in front of the audience. Thank you to my beutiful teacher and to all my friend for supporting me..ARIGATO GOZAIMAS.

Anonymous said...

juriani said....
Last tuesday uor section had do the impromtu activities.We devide into two group and every person must to write one title for each person.
I got the title 'my favourite style'for example favourite brand of t-shirt.
'What kind the presenter of me'..Every body must to list a comment strength and weakness.I had a lot of comment no wonder strength and weakness.
Strength....my group said
I have a body language, funny, loud voice, have eye contact, very brave to speak, voice good, have the point and get a ideas of my points.
Weakness...I always ook at notes, no eyes contact,voice not very clear, pause long time, lack of ideas, short content, and lack of facial expression.
I apprieciate to all the comment and I will improve my weakness.I feel confident when I speak at the day because all the audience was my friend but I feel nurveous also.I think I have a lot of weakness and I must to work hard to improve my weakness..Thats all from me.Thank you.

Anonymous said...

anep said,


Assalamualaikum and good morning,good afternoon,good evening,to my teacher and all my beloved friends.When we talk about "What kind of presenter i am",I'm not a good presenter.Hahahaha....I have not confident to talk in front of audience.I have a good idea,but i can't to elaborate it...so shamed...Last tuesday,our class make game called "Impromtu speech".I got a romantic topic.I get a good idea but i still cannot eloborate well.I can't see all the comment that my friend give to me...I keep it in my desk.When i saw my friend's can talk very well,i think my heart is nothing...I buy any book to improve myself in English,attend many seminar but now i can't begineer in English.So shamed.My brother's teach me the properties of English.i am good in memorize.I always think why we must learn English???Like Japan,they don't use English as common languages but they still one step to future..Like in Malaysia,why we can't use our mother languages.What's so important English.That's i am still thinking today.When i get in UMp,I have the answer.English is useful to us to get in job.Besides,i hope i will be not a good but still can talk in front of audiece very smoothly and clearful.Previously in matric,i got band 2 in MUET.I hope in here I want to repair my MUEt result to be get BAND 4.Also i want to learn hom become a good writer.So that's all i want to share with you all.I hope you all understand what i talk about.I am not well in writing.This is true comment not copyright from others.See you all in class.(",)
Thank you...
Your sincerely,
Hanif

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum and very good day to all of you.Actually,I have nothing to say about this topic "What kind of presenter I am".Last week,our section had done impromtu speech that onvolved all students in this section..
The activities is quite interesting and everyone enjoyed this activities.
I realize that I am not a good presenter but I had tried my best to be a good presenter.
Firstly,when we have to give impromtu speech,I feel quite narvous and I can feel that my heart beats become more faster than usual.But,I feel more comfortable because I only have to give impromtu speech to all my friends(not to all students and staff in UMP).There are many mistake that I have done during my impromtu speech.My voice is too slow and lack of communication skills.Although I have the ideas, but I do not know how to elaborate and make people understand the point that I want to say...
After this activities,I relized that I have to improve my impromtu speech.I hope that I can be a good presenter like T.J Walker...That all from me..bye..Thank you..

nasrulddin (nas)

Anonymous said...

assalamualikumwarahmatullahiwabarakatuh...its quite long but that is better..ok,last week was my first time talking in a group with all friend. so i got several type of comment about my speech. the positive one is almost of them said that i am so calm while talking. thanks for those who give me that comment. they also said that i gat many idea to elaborate too. actually it depends on my situation.for the weakness comment, most of them said that i am monotone and my voice was low. that was my pure weakness since i am at school. however, thanks for giving me those comments, so that i know where was my weakness.thank you.lalala...

Anonymous said...

My first impression after I got my title for the speech, I feel nervous but I try to find the idea. I try to speak even though it taught .After I done my speech; my friends said that I’m too shy. My voice also cannot be heard because my voice is soft. I will try my best, to be a good presenter. Thank you to all my friends, I appreciate your comment to me.

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum...and have a nice day to my beloved teacher and my friends.First and foremost,I feel very happy with english lesson that I learn many things.So,'what kind of presenter I am?'.Actually,I am not good presenter,but with my experience as prefect in secondary school,mostly I learn to be confident actually. Last Tuesday,our class had do an interesting activity called 'impromptu speech' but I don't think its interesting to me.Everybody give comment to me about strength and weakness.So,I will learn from mistakes or weakness about my speak.I should improve the body language,eye contact,voice projection.I think this section give many lesson to me.Thank to teacher and all my friends.

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum..
it's good to be back here to leave a comment in this blog.As you know,everybody in this section is little bit shy to give a talk in front of the public.So,about what kind of presenter am i..hmm..i think i am a nervous person to give a talk or presentation.According to my friends,i talk too fast in my talk.So,they did not understand much about what i am saying..hehe..Besides that,i also cannot elaborates the point in my speech.My friend also said that i look so confident when give a talk,but i think i am not.
Sincerely,
Najib(C15)

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum..
During impromptu speech,our activities in class,i got quite easy tittle..."what kind of person i'm looking for"..i got my idea to talk,but i'm still cannot speak loudly,because of my nervous.To all my friend in my group,thank a lot for all your comment..i'm very happy during this session..it teach me to improve my weakness(about my eye contact,my voice and my body language.

Anonymous said...

assalamualaikum.
This is my first comment.So, i very nervous.Two weeks ago,many section such as section c15 and c16 were watched public speaking at mini theater.I like to see public speaking but I don't like to give public speaking.It is because I no have confident to give speech in front of audiens.Although, my grammar also broken until I don't know what I say sometime.But,when I saw my idol presenter TJ Walker,I saw he have personality himself to give his public speaking.He have more and more confident when he speaking in front of all people.He also have more reaction and from his face and more eye contact with audiens.This ways given interested for audiens to see him when he speaking.I hope after that I can speak like TJ walker.Thank YOU..

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum to my beloved teacher...
Firstly, I also want to apologize to you because of this lateness and before this I ever sent a comment for this topic but it also not be appeared at this blog.So today, I will sent again my comment to this blog...
On Last 28th July 2008,our class had done an interesting activity called "impromptu speech".So I try the best for myself to build up my confident and improve myself in public speaking from the activity.In the activity,my friend should comment about my speech and from the comment I can know what kind presenter am I? This question have been answered by comments from all of my group members. After I read all of the comments, I know that I also have a good confident in my speech but my vocabulary is weak.So,after doing this activities, I know my weakness and strength in giving a speech. So,I hope I will improve my vocabulary and overcome all the weakness and be a good presenter in the future.
Thank You....
Wassalam...

Anonymous said...

Assalamualaikum and good day to all my friends and to our beloved teacher, Mdm Noli Maishara..
I am so sorry for being late to sent a comment for this blog... Because before this i already try for this.. But internet in my room is not really good and i cannot send any comment.. So sorry for that.. I still remember about this topic until now.. When we talk about "What kind of presenter am i",i think, i am not really good in impromtu speech.. Firstly, i feel so nervous, but i try my best.. I get so many comment from my classmate. So,from this comment i know who i am and i know what kind of presenter am i.. I need to improve my self in all aspect.. From all the comment that i get, not all give the negative comment.. I also get some positive comment and i try to keep it.. I do feel that this kind of activity is very good and helpful especially for those who are lacking of speaking skills. I do not like to give or deliver speech to others because I knew that my confidence level is very low. So, i need to improve my self.. From this impromtu speech, i hope i will make a better speech in my future...
Thank You..